Task 3. Black Death Essay.   

Please write an essay in response the following question:

What were the short-term and long-term effects of the Black Death on medieval society?

700-800 words. Quality over quantity! 

Check the plan below for advice on planning your essay.

Extra tips:

  • Remember to check the rubric when completing the task to see where marks are allocated

  • Use quotes and facts to support your discussion. Ensure that you reference (footnote) your sources. See if you can directly "quote" or reference some resources to validate your discussion- we will talk about appropriate referencing in class.

  • Maps/diagrams are great! Just make sure you caption and refer to them- eg; don't just throw them in there for the sake of it!

  • No need to 'waffle'- get to the point!

Black Death essay plan

Use the following outline to plan and structure your essay: 

Introduction: Summarise what the essay is about. (Do the introduction last!)

  • Introduce The Black Death, what was it and where did it come from?

  • Include a labelled map showing the spread and origin

  • General statistics- how many people died?

How to write a paragraph

  • Start with a strong 'topic sentence' that states the content of the paragraph.

  • 3 main points

  • Use evidence from the sources, quotes and facts etc. to support your discussion.

  • Close the paragraph with a sentence that directly relates to the essay question.

Paragraph 1 & 2: Symptoms and treatment

  • Use examples to describe the symptoms and health impacts of the Black Death.

  • Use examples to explain how doctors and the community tried to treat the sick

Paragraph 3 & 4: Impact on society and culture

  • How did the church view the Black Death?

  • Describe the religious response to the Black Death (Pogroms, flagellants etc)

  • Describe the impact on arts and literature. Use quotes and paintings (primary sources) to illustrate your discussion

Paragraph 5 & 6: Impact on the economy

  • Changes in the population - less people - negative short term and positive long term

  • The effect on serfs and the feudal system - changes to economy and society

  • The effect on medieval women.

Essay planning

Paragraphs are beautiful - a four step fail safe plan 

To do: Writing a TEEL paragraph

  1. Topic: Begin EACH  new paragraph with a clear and precise topic sentence that refers directly to the content of the paragraph. The topic sentence tells the reader what the paragraph is about, or its main idea

  2. Explain: Explain what you mean in greater detail.

  3. Evidence: Provide evidence to support your idea or claim. To do this, refer to your research. This may include: case studies, statistics, documentary evidence, academic books or journal articles. Remember that all evidence will require appropriate citation.

  4. Link: Summarise the main idea of the paragraph, and make clear how this paragraph supports your overall argument. The linking sentence links one paragraph to the next and provides another device for helping you ensure your text is cohesive. 

Essay Guide: Referencing Guidelines

When do you need an endnote/ footnote?

  • Quotes

  • Paraphrasing

  • Facts and figures

  • Images 

How to footnote

  1. The first time you footnote a book, article or document you need to list it in full as follows:

  2. Jones, E., A collection of inappropriate remarks made in the History classroom, Penguin, 2024, p.34

  3. If you quote from Inappropriate Remarks as your next quote you don’t write out the whole author/title again you simply use the abbreviation ibid., p#

  4. If you quote from the same source, same page it is simply ibid.

  5. If your next quote is from a different source, you need to write out full reference: author surname, initials, title in italics, publisher, year of publication, page number.

  6. If your next quote is again from Inappropriate Remarks, you simply put the author’s name and initials and the abbreviation op.cit., p#

Footnote samples

  1. Jones, E., A collection of inappropriate remarks made in the History classroom, Penguin, 2024, p.34

  2. ibid.

  3. ibid., p.38

  4. McKenzie, C.M., Please don't make me go back in there. A classroom memoir, Featherhead, 2019, p.11

  5. Jones, E., op.cit., p.59

Example reference list

Bibliography:

Aub.edu.lb.libguides.com. (2020). LibGuides: Lebanese Civil War: 1975-1991: Home. [online] Available at: https://aub.edu.lb.libguides.com/LebaneseCivilWar.

Badran, T., 2008. The Lebanese Civil War. MERIA: Middle East Review of International Affairs, 12(2), pp.MERIA: Middle East Review of International Affairs, June 2008, Vol.12(2).

Crawford, M. & Army Command General Staff Coll Fort Leavenworth KS School Of Advanced Military Studies, 2010. Civil War and Intervention: Lessons Remembered From the Lebanese Civil War and the U.S. Response.